Courtesy of Willi Heidelbach
I gave the author suggestions for how to develop the characters and clarify the plot of his novel Elementals
This developmental letter was written to an author I had no previous correspondance with, so it covers all my feedback for the novel. I was given a very gracious compliment on my work by editing professional Linda Meyer:
This is professional-level developmental work, and I appreciate your dedication to excellence. I have no doubt that authors will be delighted to work with you, and some publishing house will count itself fortunate to have you on their editorial staff.
Read the developmental edit below: